Sunday, May 27, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: First Kiss


So, I am going to start participating in this "Six Sentence Sunday" thing that alot of peeps do. I think it will be fun!

This is from my WIP! :)

Hope you like it. Please let me know what you think!



He hadn’t intended to kiss her but as her soft, warm lips caressed his, Cole couldn’t have changed his mind even if he’d wanted to. Her curves hit his hard chest with enough impact that should have jarred him back into his head, but he was lost and overheated immediately. He wrapped her into a tight embrace and kissed her harder.
            She fought him, but his mouth was demanding over hers, and Andi opened for him, melted against him. She tasted sweeter than he imagined, like a ripe berries. Her tongue touched his, not tentative in the least.

I picked long sentences...yay. ;)



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6 comments:

  1. What type of berries? Is it wrong to want Cole to think MY lips are like ripe strawberries and have him nibble on them?

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  2. Very Nice SIX! Lovely, hot sweet kiss

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  3. Awesome six! Hot and sweet :) I can't wait to read more of this project.

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